This is my story i made plz enjoy!

Chapter 1 A Fantage life for Secret_life7
Secret_life7 just started Fantage yesterday.Secret had a hard time making friends.Secret was really nice to everyone, but no one seems want to be her friend and no one bother giving Secret a tour.Secret went into the Le shop.She saw lots of clothes.She bought some simple clothes because Michelle didnt let Secret buy member clothes.Secret went out of the Le Shop and bump into a girl named Dani8777.Dani was really nice to Secret.Then a storm of agents from the HuntsClan rushed in and grab Dani.Secret ran for Dani and caught up.Secret saw that Dani had magic.Dani use her magic and defeated few of the HuntsClan.Then a flash of light came in front of Secret.Its was Orion....Orion gave Secret magic and a crystal ball.Secret used her powers to Defeat some HuntsClanS.Dani became Secret friend and teash her some magic.Dani said,"I am part of a group called Magic Universes a group of magic people who wants to stop the HuntsClan,Bad Shadows,Bad Vampires,and Mana Hunters.They evil wants to take over all of Fantage.........to be continued in Chapter 2 Facing the Bad Shadows.
( The HuntsClan, Mana Hunters, Bad Shadows and Vampires r real in Fantage )

Cool!

It seems rlly interesting, especially the different clans. I can't wait to find out what happens next!

Im going to post chapter 2

It was my first try so thanks for a very truthful opinion!

Werid.... secret_life7 and orangencreme were on fantage today......

good job

Here is Chapter 2


Chapter 2 Facing the Bad Shadows
Secret have learn alot since the day Dani and her met.Secret learned that her power source was crystals.Since Secret got her crystal ball, Secret been looking inside the crystal ball a lot.Secret once saw a face in the crystal ball.Then Dani said that the crystal ball use to belong to the Bad Shadows,Orion capture one of the Bad Shadows and then got the crystal ball from them .The Bad Shadows use the crystal ball as a soul keeper.Sometimes Secret heard many cries from the crystal ball.One night Secret scream because of her nightmare,then suddenly the crystal ball broke....Secret felt lots pain in her chest.The next day Secret told Dani what happen last night.Dani said that if someone broke the crystal ball Secret`s life shortens.Secret thought that her scream broke the crystal ball.Secret really didnt want to find out.The next day Secret went outside her house and saw a shadow but not her shadow it was more evil looking.Secret got her crystal ball and said, " Evil Shadow you had arisen and now brought evil upon Fantage...YOU SHALL COME BACK WHERE U BELONG! " Amazingly the crystal ball sucked the Bad Shadow... Secret didnt know what she just said now.Next Secret walk out and saw more and lots more Bad Shadows....and the Shadows got Dani!The Shadows said,"Give me that ball or I have to use force!"
Secret didnt hand over the ball, Secret said,"Evil Shadows you have arisen from the deep and now you must go back where u belong! " The Shadows was suddenly gone, they had disapear into the crystal ball.Secret felt bad for the Shadows,she didnt know what she was thinking. Secret never felt that scared in her life.....To be continued in Chapter 3 Secret`s secrets.


This time i tried to add details.Hope your guys like it!

Great Story!

awesome! i love it:]

wow interesting story nice one

Here is Chapter 3

Chapter 3 Secret`s secrets
This chapter you are going to learn all about Secret_Life7.First of all Secret is the chosen one to save all of Fantage`s citizens.Secret didnt born at Fantage .Secret grew up in another place called Club Penguin. Secret lives with her parents in an fancy,big igloo.Secret`s mom is Elizabeth and her dad is Officer Russell.Secret had one older brother named CastleWarrior.Secret would train every day, then one day Secret got kidnapped away into a place called SecretBuilders.Secret was captured by the Bad Vampires of course because the vampires saw how powerful Secret was.Secret`s mom and dad was killed by the Vampire`s king because Secret wouldnt join them.Secret escape the kidnappers and found two fosterparents named Michelle and Micheal.Then Secret and her fosterparents moved to a beautiful place called Fantage.When Secret and her foster parents found a beautiful house,Secret got brainwashed by the HuntsClan.Secret forgot she even got powers also she forgot her brother.Even Secret forgot her real parents and friends... to be continue in Chapter 4 you will know how Secret escape all the HuntsClan evil tricks in Chapter 4 A HuntsClan member!?!

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